Quote -- wording for travel poster & T-shirt

A business in United States needed a graphic design and received 29 Bold, Personable, travel / tourism graphic designs from 9 designers

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I want to create a poster and t-shirt using a quote by Edward Abbey about Utah. I've attached an attempt I did myself. I'm happy with my concept but am wanting someone to execute the idea better and make it look more polished. I think the quote may be more impactful with different spacing, specifically if "IF IRONED" and "OUT FLAT" were on their own lines, and therefore bigger, and if the following words were smaller? I'm unsure which of our Timber Moose logos works better in the space. Read more