Can I have any feedback on my design? Thank you :)

can i have feedback on my design if any change is necessary in my design? Thank you :)

Hi, I have submitted a logo design , can you please check and please provide me your feedback.
thanks.

good day! do you have any changes regarding to my design,,you rated me 4star Design #6035461

Hi, I would to love hear from you any feedback is much appreciated.

Thank you!