Hello Abaan. I would like to see 3 new slides on your next iteration to improve faster:

Opportunity Slide: Please just remove the person standing ontop of “growth” from the Opportunity slide with 4 stars.

Working Smarter Slide: I haven’t seen a first draft of this. Please submit something.

Plan slide: I think the red color we use for the "build" column and the blue color we use for the dates need to be lighter and not as attention grabbing so the "Revenue" and "Profitable" pop more (from the Plan Slide with 4 stars).

Once I have given you 5 stars for each slide, I will declare you the winner and we can do little tweaks to finish up. We are close. Please send me a message when they are up and I will immediately provide feedback so we can do 2 iterations. Hopefully we can close this out soon.

Hello, I approved the plan slide. Can I the "Working Smarter" Slide and an iteration on the "Opportunity" and "Thank you". If you message me when it's up I will provide immediate feedback.

Please create a version of the "Working Smarter" Slide and I will award you as the winner.

I really need a draft of all the remaining work by tomorrow and everything 100% complete by the next day so I can give a presentation. I appreciate it!

Hello, Again you did an amazing job, thank you. Can you send all of the sources? I have a pitch to give tomorrow and want to show your work off.

Hi, Great work. Only 2 issues, both with the plan slide. Firstly the font of size 12 is too small, I think the minimum size font we ever use should be 14 or it's just too hard to see. Also the shapes got messed up in the conversion to keynote, so can you make a keynote friendly version like you did with marketing?