Feedback please.

Please provide feedback for your designs.
''Design is about communicating with people. The more personal the communication, the more effective the design'' - The Dye Lab.
For effective design - PLEASE LET US KNOW YOUR THOUGHTS!
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Hi,
Thank you for your invite. Very interesting.
I shall immediately start working on your logo design and shall send my design samples at the earliest.
Regards

Some feedback would be nice.

thanks for the invite. Kindly review my entry on the logo and give feedback so i can proceed to the business card

Hi, Can you please provide feedback on my submission.
Thank you.

feedback please

Hi feedback please