So you want the logo itself to have all these additional words set in the background correct? From what the example looks like I'm guess you also are wanting a gradient background.

Feedback please.

Hi,

Could you please provide feedback.

Many thanks,
Hayley

Hi Nreimer,
Well we actually need one that looks like this with all the words and one clean with just the ministry's name. We want it smooth, very modern looking not gradient (it was just a sketch). The word "Redeemed" should be the main focus though.
Thank you!
Yvette

Hi, Here is my logo proposal for you, Can you Please send me your feedback and let me know if this is close to your wishes.
Thank you.