Hello sir,
what about my design (#10527778), Place give me the feedback.
Thanks.

Hello!
We really like your design. We are just chatting about some small modifications we are hoping you may make. I will get back to you in a day or so with our ideas. Really great job though.
Cheers!
Nicole

Thank you very much,

Hello sir,
I change label with your feedback, is it OK tell me have any changes ?
Thanks.

Dear client,
Congratulation for such interesting project. It's my favorite field. Please see my proposals #10593735 #10593735. Hope you'll like it. If something else needed, please let me know. Good luck!