feedback please? thank you.

Very nice, but it was missing many of the elements that I requested. Thanks!

hi,
what is you size preference, please.
thanks.
regards

Gea scott! I uploaded the wrong file. I'll fix it. Sorry :(

good day, i sent a revision of my last design when you get a chance if you could review it? thank you again.

I'm not sure - needs to be bold and large enough to be displayed on digital media screens for indoor advertising