Hello, thank you very much for the rate, i really appreciate some feedback for to improve my proposal. would be an honor if you choose one of my designs.

I'll be attentive to anything that you need.

Have a great day!!!

Hi , feedback please

I appreciate the submission. I'll admit it is one of the most innovative designs. I liked that you went with a shape that could overlay a background such as that. It was pretty cool seeing it in front of a picture of young people. However, I think I need something that doesn't rely so much on a background. I plan to use it on a website and business cards at first, which this would look great on, but I might want to expand to t-shirts or something in the future. And if you take away the picture, it's just a shape that some might not be able to identify back to the site/community. Because of the innovative approach, I don't know if I have many suggestions. I welcome other ideas but i dont know how much i can build on this one.