Please could I get some written feedback for further improvement?

Much appreciated,

Kyle.

Hi Kyle,

Thanks for your submission, it's one of the best we have received so far. We'd really appreciate it if you could submit something on our other stunt scooter logo design listing as well. It's called: "VENDETTA Stunt Scooter"

Kind regards,
Jack

Thank you, much appreciated feedback!

I will take a look later this evening and send through my design ideas.

Kind regards,

Kyle.

Many thanks Kyle, we look forward to it.
As of yet, we haven't received anything worthwhile on the VENDETTA listing. And so far yours is in the lead on this one so it's a good opportunity to win both.

Regards,
Jack

I will be submitting a few type styles shortly with different interpretations on the word. More will be coming later this evening so don't feel I am not committed to the project with just a few ideas!

Regards,

Kyle.

Hi Jack,

Please see my latest upload as it is a display of a model scooter to which I have uploaded the logo - giving a better representation of the model.

regards,

Kyle.