Please give me some suggestions and feedback so that I can improve my design ? If you have something else in mind help me and write me that so I can come up with complete new versions . Please check my portfolio and profile and see what I can do for you .

With regards
Kim.

please send me some Feedback on my design so i can improve it ?

Please review my submissions, read the descriptions and return feedback. I'd love to be able to make any changes prior to the contest closing. Thanks, Troy