Please check my design and please send me some comments / feedback / suggestions . Please help me to build your perfect Brand logo. I am waiting for your reply.

Please give me some suggestions and feedback so that I can improve my design.

Thank you for your rating of my design. But what can I do to it that will make it a five-star design? If you have any suggestions and improvements, please attach them to my designs.

Kind regards,
- Thomas

feedback please