Please give me some suggestions and feedback so that I can improve my design ? If you have something else in mind help me and write me that so I can come up with complete new versions . I can do for you .

Sir, if my design there are less and not as you wish, please do not hesitate to give feedback and revisions to me, I will do what is best for you and I will do as soon as possible, thankyou

feedback please

Hi, have a look at my new design.
Provide some useful feedback for improvements.
Thank you and God bless.