Any feedback?

To: "The RANFOUR Project"

Yes, I like the design, but we will have an inter-office vote at the end of this month to determine which of the many designs we will go with. I like the feel of your design, it is something like this that came to mind when I put the project out for bidding. Thanks.

Dear Project Owner,

Please let me know if you would like to try different color schemes on the design submitted by me.

Kind Regards,
Dheeraj