Hello! Please, feedback if possible! Thanks!

thanks a lot sir for your feedback , sir please check my new revision design #18480848 and #18480849 , i hope you like it , for any change send me a feedback please...
and please rate my design ,
sir i have a request if you like my logo please rate it 4 or 5 star ratings , it helps me to growth my full account ratings , but if you give 1/2/3 star ratings , it hampered my full account ratings , i hope you dont mind and consider about it , and thanks again for your feedback , best regards

so sorry its just a mistake ...

feedback please , on my design#18480848 and #18480849 .regards