Hello Contest Holder,i see that you rated my design,but can you please as well give me constructive feedback on what would you want to be changed in the design ?

This is the design:
#18645480

Best Regards,
CrazyCoderz

Hello Contest Holder,i have just submitted a revision of the previous logo design.
Please do give me constructive feedback and rating and tell me if you need something changed.
Here is my logo design:
#18652695

Best Regards,
CrazyCoderz

Thank you to everyone who submitted logos, and we were very impressed with many of the options provided.

We have chosen the top two designs that we will be moving forward with.