Feedback please.

#19359810 , Please Check. Provide feedback if I'm on right track. Thanks.

feedback please

Thanks you everyone for your amazing submissions. We are just deliberating over the last couple and have contacted them about tweaks. There were so many ideas that we could have run with but we can only choose one.

If you think its not close then can you please explain me what you want from scratch so i can try again ? I really dont want to GIVE Up .. i want to try and see its a bit challenge for me too . Please at list send me soem feedback on other designs i submitted ?