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Sir please check my design

Hello Sir/Madam,

Would you mind if I request you to check my submitted logos and let me know your valuable feedback. Let me know your feedback and I assure you that I will take every steps to make the logo more business oriented and most suitable for your business.

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Thanks,
Subhajit

Hello Sir/Madam,

Any feedback on the logo design #19871749 ?

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Thanks,
Subhajit