This is going well so far. Thank you to all the designers who have submitted. If I've left feedback, you're on the right track and I'd appreciate to see your further efforts. If I haven't left feedback, I will look again in a day or two after letting the design sit in my head to see if I like it differently on a second look. Thank you!

feedback please #19879700 and #19879701, regards

Thank you for the updates and new submissions. The trend I'm seeing is that the designs need to be more modern looking in general. If I've given you specific feedback, please go with that instead of this. Otherwise, for the followup designs, I'll appreciate seeing a technological side to the design. Also, please make it very simple. If it's difficult to make something fit in well, get rid of that part and work on the rest of the design. Thank you!