Feedback please.

Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

Best.

hello sir,
feedback please on my design, #19992828...#19992829...#19992830..

thanks..

respected, contest holder

we have just submitted our design concept as #19997908. hope you will like it.

your kind and valuable feedback is greatly appreciated.

regards,

Webpixlr