sir please check my design #20631054

Hello contest holder,

Merry Christmas. I have uploaded my design #20631638 and #20631637 as per your given brief. Have you checked my design yet?
Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks so that I can improve my design . Your feedbacks are extremely valuable for me to get the best designs for your brand.If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most . Hope to receive a feedback from you asap so that I can get an opportunity to work with you.

With regards,
Melody's Creation.

Hello,
I am waiting eagerly for your feedback and ratings.

Hi Rich,

I have submitted the design with solid letters 2 times and sent you a
message. If you did not get it please let me know.