feedback please (#21309677)

feedback please .......

Please check my revision #21310314, thanks

Please check my new concept (#21311475), thanks

Would be very nice if you provide us with further informations, such as font and color preferred. You brief is too vague

I think they've kept it vague for a reason, they want to see what varied interpretations people come up with.

Hello Project Owner,

One star for my design. According to what? There is no project brief, company details and target market information. I'm curious about how you evaluate our designs. If you expect better designs from us, you have to provide more information and good brief. Otherwise your evaluation will not be fair.

Regards.