need feedback sir for design #22023581 and 22023580 and 22023582

Please provide me suggestions and feedbacks on #22020991 and #22041033 so that I can provide a better design for your brand.

hi, please check my designs and give the feedback for me.
my subs:
#22043017
#22043018

i hope you like it, thank you :)

Hi,

I hope you'd take the time to rate my designs, it's very important for me.

Best regards