Please provide feedback if possible! thanks!

Hi ! I just submitted my design, if you could check it (#22169249) and give me a feedback so I could improve it in your way. Thanks !

Thanks everyone for the designs - they have opened up ideas that I hadn't thought of. The star rating I am giving them does not reflect on your ability, it is a ranking for me to order which ones appeal to me the most. I will give specific feedback to those I think are closest to what I am looking for. I want something that I can add different taglines to for the different components of the company. Thanks again for your submissions.