SIR, WHICH TAGLINE SHOULD I INCLUDED? STILL, IT IS NOT CLEAR,.??????

The tag line is:
It's Your Name, Wear It Out!

sir, Check My Design(#22375614)
and If you need any change or improvement let me know please. Thanks

Mohon tanggapan dengan desain ini #22398847
apabila ada tambahan pada logo, harap masukkannya..
terima kasih

sir please don't choose a winner , until complete the deadline ,.. i have to submit my new concept for you,.. thank you..

what a fake

Please explain