Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

Best.

Please give me some suggestions and feedbacks on #22401313 so that I can improve my design . Your feedbacks are extremely valuable for me to get the best designs for your brand.If you have something else in mind to help me then please write me so that I can come up with something which you like the most . Hope to receive a feedback from you asap so that I can get an opportunity to work with you.

Hello,
I have submitted my designs and I really appreciate if you can provide me a feedback.
Thank You.