Can you please evaluate and issue the corresponding comments about my design? thanks and I hope you like it

Possible feedback on my entry would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks. 

Hope you like the design and please let me know if there is anything you don't like or want to replace that thing :)

hi sir hope you can give feedback on my 8 designs submitted

i am working on the design please do not close it earlier.thank-you

 please give me a feedback for design #22730348
thank you