sir, please check my entry #22858190 #22858191

Possible feedback on my entry would be muchly appreciated.
Thanks. 

feedback please

feedback please..

Feedback please.

Can i know what u need sir? Ive been trying using shadow any version with plan dark background but still fail. Please explain more detail. Because this the first im really confused.
Because the most important on the logo is easy place on any media.



Regards.

Thank you. I misunderstood the background. I thought it was part of the logo. thanks