feedback plz

I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.
Design ID - #23233978

feedback please...

hi sir
please check my design #23240841 #23240842
feedback please .......

HI PROJECT OWNER

Please don't give a 1-3 star, if you don't like it you better ignore it or you eliminate it. Because it greatly affects the designer's rating.

thank you

Please don't give a 1-3 star, if you don't like it you better ignore it or you eliminate it. Because it greatly affects the designer's rating.
thank you

Hope you like the designs! let me know if there is anything you don't like or want to replace that thing. Your feedback on my design would be much appreciated :)

I just submitted my design thought according to your brief. Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track?
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