Hi I submitted an entry please review design (#24201504) and (#24201505) hope to hear your feedback. thanks

hello sir,
please check and feedback please on my design, #24202233, #24202234, #24202235, #24202236, #24202237..
Rating Guide: If you like any design rate it between 3-5 stars, otherwise just 'eliminate' it. Rating 1-2 stars severely impact the designer profile and hence limits to contribute more submissions to contest. Thanks for understanding.
thanks and regards.