Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track. If you don't like my design, please eliminate those rather than giving 1 or 2 star rating.

Best.

I sent in my design just now. If it's not too much trouble; when you get a chance to look at it, I would appreciate if you could leave me feedback.

Thank you so much.

oh and my design is (#24486745)