Hello there,
I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track. If you don't like my design, please eliminate those rather than giving 1 or 2 star rating.

Best.

hi!
Any feedback...? :/

Hi,
Any feedback on my design proposal would help in improving myself.
Thank You.

Should not have

The color blue. No security guards or shields.

yeah. very confusing.

and polished logo - not mock-up :)

and polished logo - not mock-up :)