feedback please on design 24843414 , thanks

Hello,
Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
Thanks

Hello there,

I just submitted my design thought according to your brief.Please review my design and let me know if I am on right track.

If you don't like my design, please eliminate those rather than giving low star rating. My design have the follow number

Much respect!

Hi There,

I have submitted my designs and I really appreciate if you can provide me a feedback.

Thank You.