Hello. I am really interested in this contest, but I really need your feedback. I have uploaded only a part of the illustration (#24926495) because I need to know your opinion about the drawing of the face. If you think I can get to what you are looking for please let me know and don't hesitate to ask for any change or adjustment! Thanks a lot for the opportunity!

I am trying to understand your request so please if you dont't like any design please just 'eliminate' it. Rating 1-2 stars severely impact the designer profile. Thanks for understanding.

Hi, sorry that I actually only see this message now, and I've already sent you my feedback. I will not rate a designer with their first try, so will for sure not give you 1 or 2 stars.
Indeed, my comment was about the face too. It didn't look like me. but I don't now how to describe it. Perhaps you can give it another go, and if I see a difference or improvement, I can tell you what's better?

Hi, I have sent 1 of the 2 illustrations(#24953247). Please give a feedback so that i can improve on this and make the second illustration similarly.