24980079 Please Check my Design and Feedback. Thank you so much

24980234 please check my Design and Feedback. Thank you so much

Hello there,

I just submitted my design thought according to your brief. Please review my design and let me know if I am on the right track.
If you don't like my design, please eliminate those rather than giving a low star rating.

#24985395

Thanks for an invitation. Submitted my design. Please have a look.