Here is a my logo Design according to your brief kindly check and give me a feedback about both designs #25161036 #25162491

Hi
I just sent a revision, I am the person you messege, namely cakrok 24, I use my brother's account, please check, I deliberately use this account because my account Cakro 24 has been closed by designcrowd, can you explain what you want to me, I will revise everything you want
thank you