Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
thanks. 

Hi there,

Please provide your feedback on my design concept.

Thanks & Kind Regards,
Design Nation.

Hi,
Please check out the revised versions.
Thank you.

Thanks Nizu. Great work. On this project we ended up going with a different design but you were a very close second out of 100+ submissions. We will keep you in mind for future projects for sure.