Please sir check my design #25827954

Hi, I submitted an entry, please review design (#25828458) and please provide direct feedback on my entry, hope to hear you soon. Thank you!

Dear Project Owner,

I have submitted my designs.
I know you are busy but, would you mind to give me your feedback?
Please tell me if I am on the right track.

Best regards!
Coco

feedback please!

Hi, thank you for the positive feedback on my initial design I added revisions prior to your request please review design (#25835028) and let me know your thoughts. Thanks