feedback please!

Hello,
Possible feedback on my design would be muchly appreciated.
Thank you.

Thank you for the initial submissions. I will have my Communications Director review with me. If it would not make the design to cluttered, could we add "more than a store". I like the submissions that included a diamond. Thanks again

Why a Diamond?

What happened to the diamond you are talking about? Very unprofessional

Did you see the question mark after the word “diamond”. That means we were not certain but would like to see some ideas. It was meant to explore possibilities. I’m sorry you thought it was unprofessional