Possible feedback on my entry would be much appreciated.
thanks.  

Thank you to all that have submitted your designs so far. I am very impressed by your creativity and options collected thus far! Please keep in mind that my last name is Hall so ideally out of the three words: Cypress Hallow Farm - I what the word Hallow to stand out the most. If you could do something creative with the Hall part of Hallow - whether a font treatment or color - I would love to see some variety.