feedback, please!

Thanks for appreciating my work. I am always here to revise my draft as quick as you reply me back. I expect you love my ideas.

Dear Project Owner,

Please feedback and tell me if I am on the right track.

Best regards!
Filip

feedback please!

Sir
I submitted my design and hope you like it and give me 4/5 star ratting but If you don’t like my entries kindly left me without star instant of low star(1/2/3).
Because I spend a lot of time for your design.