Feedback please

Feedback please:

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Hi Project Owner,

I have submitted my design & please share your feedback on that,
it will help me know if i am moving in the right direction.
If you would like any changes in the design feel free to say that .

Thanks & regards.

NOTE:
If you don't like this design,
please leave it with ZERO stars.
Or eliminate it without stars.
Low 1 ,2 and 3 star ratings downgrade the designer's personal rating
and he has no motivation to come up with new ideas.

Thank you for your understanding