feedback please on design #28068672 and #28068673 , thanks

I have submitted my design. Please share your feedback on that, it will help me know if i am moving in the right direction. If you would like any changes in the design feel free to say that .

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hi project owner, I have made a logo according to the brief you provided, please check it and give a feedback.

I hope you like my Design. feedback please on design #28133419 and #28133420 , thanks