sir give me only 3 star or 4 star rating do not give me 2 star or 1 star rating if you do not like the design you should eliminated the design because low star rating bad impact on my overall profile please keep things in mind
thanks

I was giving honest feedback and have the right to put as many stars as I want. Appreciate what you're saying and will take this onboard.

Most designs so far appear too corporate and IT based, we need something with appeal please

Again designs are being sent as external signage, business card mockups etc. This logo is to be used on a website primarily and should stand out and grab attention.

Logo doesn't have to be part of the text or can be separate, I just mentioned possibly using the 4 as an example. Open to ideas.

Dear Honorable Sir,

Have a great day.

possible feedback on my design ##28447384 would be much-appreciated .

I hope you'll love my concept.

Please don't be hesitate to ask for revision if you need any changes.

Regards.

(In case if you don't like my concept, Just let me know I'll go with a different approach)