feedback please on my submission design #28776602 and #28776603 , regards

Hi there,
i just finish my concept but look like you already got your Logo, so i decided to upload it in my GD just to show you, so please just tell me what you think of the concept
https://www.mediafire.com/file/6thavmfu6fggbon/Sneaker_Base-02.jpg

Hey, thank you for your proposal. I like the idea, I was playing around with it too. But I find the design too squeezy, like a 90s hip hop video :) Thank you for your time anyways!