feedback me on design 29699518 and 29699519 , thanks

please sir check my design (#29699594),,

Dear Contest Holder,
I've submited my logo concept at design number #29699780. Please kindly check it out and I would be very happy if you would like to provide feedback so I know your opinion and can provide revisions if needed as soon as possible.
Thank You :)

Regards,

Feedback please #29702650

#29703915 as well

Feedback please (#29706984)