KINDLY CHECK MY INTERPRETATION OF YOUR LOGO (DESIGN NO - #29704365). ANY KIND OF FEEDBACK WILL BE APPRECIATED

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Dear costumer,
My logo concept is entry #29735482 in the contest. Please take a moment to review it, and I would be grateful if you could let me know what you think so I can make any necessary modifications as soon as possible.
looking forward to your response.
Thank you,