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we added our own spin to the design since almost all designers are gonna come with the same design, have a look at our design we think you gonna love it, gwenXOXO.

Revisions submitted. :) Please do let me know your thoughts on these so I can adjust any changes you need moving forward.

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The brief says a serious logo is required.