Please check my design #30823419 and please give me your valuable feedback. Thank you so much.

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Hi,
It is definitely getting there!
So on the left there is a dog, however it looks a little bit like a fox! Is there any way we can make this look more like a German Shepherd? it is a protection dog company so if we can make it look a little ore serious that would be great! The dog on the right is perfect.
I know thats not the easiest description but I just want to see some options and perfect it. we love the idea, and with a few tweaks i think it could be great!
Kind Regards

Thank you so much, please can we have #30823419 in individual vector format images