feedback me on design 30986262 and 30986263 . thanks

Hi, I submitted an entry; please review the design (#30991233) and (#30991232); kindly provide direct feedback on my entry. I hope to hear you soon. Thank you!

Give me a feedback of my design

Hi, Thanks for the feedback; I added some revisions; please review the design (#31015885) and let me know if you still need changes; I hope to hear you again. Thank you!

can you make the leaf come out of the O in bowls?

Also can you use the following colors Neon green #00FF00 and Electric blue #00A6D7