sir plzz check my design #31161477

please provide your valuable feedback on my design #31169852 ...

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Dear,
I recently submitted the project #4047538 and I would like to kindly request your review and feedback. If there are any revisions or adjustments needed, please do not hesitate to let me know. Thank you for your time.
Best regards,

See design #31200096 we think you will love it, colors etc can alwas be adjusted, GwenXOXO.

any thoughts on Design Id #31200096 the mockup should the use of the logo and a fav icon previews as well